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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
|  Subject: old poem, new post  Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:28 pm | |
| Shattered Heaven
a fragile thing of unspeakable beauty...
a tainted glass of unkown mystery...
you mesmerize me...you blinded me...
a cruel way of destiny...
like a shadow dancing in the light...
like the core of a jewel,untouched...
my world is crumbling...
I was lost...answers I was seeking...
like the rainbows of the moon...
like the darkness of the sun...
rare...once in a lifetime...
I tried to reach...to figure...
I was lost...
I was shattered...
Everythings a blur...
SHATTERED HEAVEN II
Darkness falls...
Time stops...
tears forever sworn to be hidden...
I lament...stunned by a maiden...
Death chokes me...
heaven rejects me...
Im lost...nowhere to go...
I reached...I failed...I fell...
Deafened by silence...
Love was silent...
no clues...no answers...
full of questions...mysteries...unknown beauty...
Forever seemed to short for me...
times running to fast...
piece by piece I break down...
SHATTERED...
Shattered Heaven III
The Pieces reflect the whole
The soul slips away
No matter how hard I try...
I remain shattered
The pieces gathered
Destroyed for eternity
Lost in Oblivion
I am floating endlessly.
I no longer want to interfere
The cause is lost
my death already forseen
but my life remains unending | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:52 am | |
| reminiscing...haha...poem na ginawa ko for one of my HS crush. | |
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bLue_fLipLops
sannin
Number of posts : 1847
Age : 35
Location : kung saan may Lupa.:)
Registration date : 2008-10-09
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:51 pm | |
| writer ka?
i appreciate your poems.
hehe!
emotional. | |
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alfiecereza
Chuunin
Number of posts : 22
Age : 34
Location : Shariff Kabunsuan St.,Cotabato City
Registration date : 2008-11-17
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:43 pm | |
| maganda xa...
ingat lang baka may
kumuha... | |
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ralphrenz
sannin
Number of posts : 1873
Age : 33
Location : Sa Subastahan
Registration date : 2008-09-06
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:19 pm | |
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lil' miss Ysai. <3
Hokage
Number of posts : 2263
Age : 30
Location : Mt. Olympus~!
Registration date : 2008-11-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:30 pm | |
| gandaa..  | |
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ralphrenz
sannin
Number of posts : 1873
Age : 33
Location : Sa Subastahan
Registration date : 2008-09-06
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:37 pm | |
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ykZ
Special Jounin
Number of posts : 838
Age : 33
Location : NXT to ur door...
Registration date : 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Nov 19, 2008 8:43 pm | |
| .,wow.,
ganda pag ka compose ahh
up to part 3 pa..,, | |
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eAgGer_LY
Hokage
Number of posts : 3063
Age : 29
Location : sa bahay. xempre!
Registration date : 2008-02-29
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Thu Nov 20, 2008 12:06 pm | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Thu Nov 27, 2008 9:56 pm | |
| lingaw gud ang story nito na poem... may crush kasi ako na lower year sa akin nung 4th year ako.tapos nung 3rd year pa ako crush ko na xa ng matagal na..napapansin pansin ko na.eto ung theme ng 1st chapter kasi torpe maxado ako sige lang tingin.:p 2nd chapter naman 4th year na ako.nag amin na ako sa kanya and all.friends na din kami nun that time.kasi klasmate nya uyab ng barkada ko.pero nung nag amin ako nag layo xa.nahiya and all.sige ako taka ano gawin ko.sige ako text tanong and all tapos wala talaga reply. 3rd chapter naman graduation naman..wala na jud.move on na lang...:p | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Thu Nov 27, 2008 10:07 pm | |
| may mas mahaba pa ako dito...5 chapters talaga. | |
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arbi.lyne
Hokage
Number of posts : 2367
Age : 30
Location : Sa Puso Mo :DD
Registration date : 2008-09-24
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:51 am | |
| ganda ganda naman. ^^ how emOo. ^^ | |
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Joevill
Hokage
Number of posts : 4255
Age : 32
Location : Kansas, Missouri
Registration date : 2008-02-10
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:48 am | |
| Ok lang. nakakapagod mag basa. | |
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ykZ
Special Jounin
Number of posts : 838
Age : 33
Location : NXT to ur door...
Registration date : 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:53 pm | |
| ..,,haha nc man..,, kahit mahaba..,, | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:46 pm | |
| tnx!! ^^ ipasa ko siguro xa sa mintech or sa scintilla. | |
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Genezyde
Admin
Number of posts : 4526
Age : 37
Location : Pulang Bato
Registration date : 2007-05-06
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:48 pm | |
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cj`kasmot
Hokage
Number of posts : 2317
Age : 35
Location : ··Flaris | Saint Morning | Darkon··
Registration date : 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:54 pm | |
| gnda ng poem..,
keep up d gud work.. | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:55 pm | |
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cj`kasmot
Hokage
Number of posts : 2317
Age : 35
Location : ··Flaris | Saint Morning | Darkon··
Registration date : 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 3:55 pm | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:01 pm | |
| pagawa?for ano?anong theme?ano story?details ^^ | |
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cj`kasmot
Hokage
Number of posts : 2317
Age : 35
Location : ··Flaris | Saint Morning | Darkon··
Registration date : 2008-09-19
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:04 pm | |
| hhmmm.. poem sana..
Abwt love, ung story nya abwt
sa isng rlationshp n conflct ksi my minamahal
ka, n mhal ka din pro my mas mahal pa xa..
Wat i men is my gf ako, and mahal n mhal ko xa,
and desme rin xa skin, pro my mas mhal xa, ung
orginal bf nya.., GETS?.. | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 5:47 pm | |
| in short third party ka?:p hehe. ano panglaan? pm mo sa akin. | |
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DarkAngel_Xavier
sannin
Number of posts : 1717
Age : 30
Location : In the land of Aringay..
Registration date : 2008-10-13
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Tue Dec 02, 2008 6:00 pm | |
| Awesome! Nice poem dude.,.,. | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:01 pm | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: old poem, new post Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:49 pm | |
| nakita ko gud ang poem na to sa ibang blog...pero iba title... T_T di ko alam kung inangkin nya or nagustuhan nya lang tlaga...ayoko mag assume..
title ng blog nya is CAPTURED! tapos ang name nya is assuming...
im thinking positively...nagustuhan nya lng talaga kaya nya ni repost...sigh... | |
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