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Genezyde
Admin
Number of posts : 4526
Age : 37
Location : Pulang Bato
Registration date : 2007-05-06
|  Subject: tagalog Eh....LOKAL!  Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:33 pm | |
| Pag-ibig... hinahanap-hanap kita
Uubusin ko ang aking oras matagpuan ka lang
Lahat ay aking gagawin
Lahat ay aking ibibigay
At kung sa kabutihang palad ika’y matagpuan,
Umasa kang hindi kita iiwan
Pambababae ko ay kinalimutan ko na
Mula pa noon na araw na nakilala kita
Sa aking puso, hinding-hindi maalis
Ang iyong halik na walang kasing tamis
At ang tibok ay walang kasing tindi
Nang halikan ko ang iyong kamay at pisngi
Kaya’t magmula ngayon magpakailan man
Ikaw at ako… nagmamahalan
Pag-ibig…diyan lahat nag-umpisa
Kaya’t ang pag-ibig na aking hinahanap
Isang babaeng may pagtingin
Siya ang aking magiging lahat
Liwanag ng aking pag-unawa
At kung sakaling ikaw ang may taglay
Hayaan mong hawakan ko ang iyong kamay
Puso ko’y iaalay ko sa’yo sinta
Ikaw lang at wala nang nanaisin pa
Pinapangarap pagka’t ikaw ang nasa isip
Ikaw ang hanap, maging sa panaginip
At sa pagtinginan nating dalawa
Para bang ang buong mundo ay limot ko na
Tandaan pag-ibig ko’y walang hanggan
Ikaw ang mamahalin…magpakailanman
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C.A.Y_A.R17
Anbu Assasin
Number of posts : 88
Age : 34
Registration date : 2007-06-17
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Sun Jul 15, 2007 1:31 pm | |
| ADMIN...
lumalabas pagiging makata natin ahhh???
hehehehe
ngayon lang me active... kay di pa BC sa skul... | |
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artlink
Anbu
Number of posts : 349
Age : 36
Location : somewhere there
Registration date : 2007-07-03
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Mon Jul 16, 2007 10:52 am | |
| uu nga....hmmmmm...poetic kau c admin.... | |
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-brychie08-
Anbu Assasin
Number of posts : 105
Age : 35
Location : midsayap--davao
Registration date : 2007-12-06
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Sat Dec 22, 2007 9:51 am | |
| naks!proud to be noypi ....mahalin ang sariling atin..gnyan nga!!  | |
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Genezyde
Admin
Number of posts : 4526
Age : 37
Location : Pulang Bato
Registration date : 2007-05-06
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:02 pm | |
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pao-pao
Hokage
Number of posts : 2824
Age : 34
Location : Dasmariñas, Cavite
Registration date : 2008-01-06
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Fri Jan 25, 2008 12:44 pm | |
| Pambababae ko ay kinalimutan ko na
Mula pa noon na araw na nakilala kita
Sa aking puso, hinding-hindi maalis
Ang iyong halik na walang kasing tamis
At ang tibok ay walang kasing tindi
Nang halikan ko ang iyong kamay at pisngi
Kaya’t magmula ngayon magpakailan man
Ikaw at ako… nagmamahalan
nice itong stanza na to pre.. pao-pao nagbibigay pugay kay gringo.. | |
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Genezyde
Admin
Number of posts : 4526
Age : 37
Location : Pulang Bato
Registration date : 2007-05-06
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:41 pm | |
| - Pao-pao wrote:
- Pambababae ko ay kinalimutan ko na
Mula pa noon na araw na nakilala kita
Sa aking puso, hinding-hindi maalis
Ang iyong halik na walang kasing tamis
At ang tibok ay walang kasing tindi
Nang halikan ko ang iyong kamay at pisngi
Kaya’t magmula ngayon magpakailan man
Ikaw at ako… nagmamahalan
nice itong stanza na to pre.. pao-pao nagbibigay pugay kay gringo.. salamat pre....wala ka pla nyan??? hehehe/.. | |
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Jackofalltrades
Anbu
Number of posts : 403
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-01-30
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Tue Feb 12, 2008 11:21 pm | |
| i really admire poets who expresses firmly all the things they had in mind.
well done...
i like the colloquial lingo, but try to spiced it up a bit with connotative words.
keep it up.. | |
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Genezyde
Admin
Number of posts : 4526
Age : 37
Location : Pulang Bato
Registration date : 2007-05-06
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Wed Feb 13, 2008 3:46 pm | |
| - Jackofalltrades wrote:
- i really admire poets who expresses firmly all the things they had in mind.
well done...
i like the colloquial lingo, but try to spiced it up a bit with connotative words.
keep it up.. salamat poh boss... | |
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Jackofalltrades
Anbu
Number of posts : 403
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-01-30
| | Subject: Re: tagalog Eh....LOKAL! Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:44 am | |
| no problem  that poem of yours reminds my of Lourd Dey Vera's Alaala ni batman... free verse is an effective way to express things the Rhymed forms cannot | |
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