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+5myn'graxel Ivan Ni King [b.a.n.] Mrai tigerlily[rarr] 9 posters |
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tigerlily[rarr]
Hokage
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Number of posts : 2964
Age : 36
Registration date : 2008-11-03
|  Subject: ellipsis in our story  Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:52 am | |
| ellipsis in our story
you see i've given all
since the very day i fall
each word from my lips were true
my sight was just for you
these ears listen carefully
when you say you love me
it was like a fairytale
but on one thing we failed
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
an important thing lacked
something we just can't put back
but i guess this is it
some of the pieces just don't fit
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
now i guess it's the end
but tell me we can be friends
we both tried to make it through
we fought for me and you
i will miss our happy times
those moments when we'd rhyme
so i sing to you this song
wishin' you;d sing along
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
an important thing lacked
something we just can't put back
but i guess this is it
some of the pieces just don't fit
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
i know you loved me
i was able to see
hope i had made you feel
that loving you was real
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
an important thing lacked
something we just can't put back
but i guess this is it
some of the pieces just don't fit
you see, i see
the ellipsis in our story
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Mrai
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1078
Age : 31
Location : hawthorne heights
Registration date : 2008-08-30
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:03 pm | |
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[b.a.n.]
Raikage
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Number of posts : 1328
Age : 30
Location : sa kwan..
Registration date : 2008-11-25
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:29 pm | |
| nus blid..
hihi..
peru gndaa.. | |
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Ivan Ni King
Jounin
Number of posts : 618
Age : 31
Registration date : 2008-09-15
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:40 pm | |
| nyay..
bka malunod ka nyan..^^ | |
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myn'graxel
Anbu Squadleader
Number of posts : 208
Age : 34
Location : midSaYap!!
Registration date : 2008-08-30
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 6:31 pm | |
| ...tsar!!lalim ah,nosebleed xado!!
but nice naman!! | |
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Ivan Ni King
Jounin
Number of posts : 618
Age : 31
Registration date : 2008-09-15
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:25 pm | |
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TSULIPS
Hokage
Number of posts : 2880
Age : 32
Location : Everlasting
Registration date : 2008-03-08
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:31 pm | |
| hanep flowering words ah~.. | |
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Ivan Ni King
Jounin
Number of posts : 618
Age : 31
Registration date : 2008-09-15
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:57 pm | |
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tigerlily[rarr]
Hokage
Number of posts : 2964
Age : 36
Registration date : 2008-11-03
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Mon Jan 19, 2009 11:55 am | |
| ^ waa. wala ka kasabot eh. hehe. atik lang.  | |
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Boy_Kidlat
Kazekage
Number of posts : 1184
Age : 113
Registration date : 2007-06-07
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Mon Jan 19, 2009 6:32 pm | |
| ^^ palak pakan... dapat ata sa literature to xa nakalagay...
galing ng pagkakagawa...record mo na yan!!! patulong ka sa mga marunong!! kay gringo!!! | |
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FufoBoy
Hokage
Number of posts : 5490
Age : 31
Location : kabacan
Registration date : 2008-01-20
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:13 am | |
| - Boy_Kidlat wrote:
- ^^ palak pakan... dapat ata sa literature to xa nakalagay...
galing ng pagkakagawa...record mo na yan!!! patulong ka sa mga marunong!! kay gringo!!! bakit record? awit pala? akala ko poem | |
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tigerlily[rarr]
Hokage
Number of posts : 2964
Age : 36
Registration date : 2008-11-03
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| - Boy_Kidlat wrote:
- ^^ palak pakan... dapat ata sa literature to xa nakalagay...
galing ng pagkakagawa...record mo na yan!!! patulong ka sa mga marunong!! kay gringo!!! thnx for appreciating my work kuia julio..hehe.  | |
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cHel-sEa
Anbu Assasin
Number of posts : 139
Age : 34
Registration date : 2009-03-20
| | Subject: Re: ellipsis in our story Sat Mar 21, 2009 7:04 am | |
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